Haiku for Fun
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Oh Red. How dissapointing! Do you need more treatment? Crap. I hate BC.
Hugs and Much Love.
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that IS crap red. I am so so sorry... what can we do to help? love
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I hate it too, just hate it... not fair
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((Deb)) I will bump a
thread for you: "It's Not Good News."
Strong poetry. Strength. ♥
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Parti-color rain
of fall leaves carpets the lawn.
The wind sighs aloft.
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yes! I saw sunshine
It poked out for a minute
Just to say hello!
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Quiet in the house
I find myself reading books
And reading more books!
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I should be sewing
Or making my jewelry
Even crocheting
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Yet I am reading
With the sewing machine out
And yarn all around
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Well I am reading
Sitting in my favorite chair
Reading anyway!
LOL. Tomorrow I better catch up on my to do list. So I'll probably be reading til o dark hundred hours..... LOL
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Tomorrow I trudge
For a magnesium test
Well, I guess I'll see!
LOL
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There's more appointments
Than I can shake a stick at!
Beginning again.
I have been going to many of these since I failed my NED tests. I will have to study harder next time! No really, once again crawling up from the basement of my mind. Feeling a bit sorry for myself for a while there. Kind of back to the numb stage I was in when I first found out I had lumpies. It'll get better I am sure.
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F*ck it Red! That sucks and we'd make anyone b*TCH and moan! Thinking about you.
And sorry go hear about the problems with the Muslim idiots up there.
Much love and many hugs.
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The sun shine warmly
Upon my upturned face. Smiles
Returning slowly.
:-)
Thanks Monica
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There have been too many of these events. This haiku is for all the nut-jobs who think it's OK to walk into a place and kill people. Religious extremists or not, WTF.
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I don't get it. WHY?
Your acts are no solution.
Pointless cowardice.
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The birds know it's dawn
Even before sun comes up
They sing in the day
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A parfait of clouds
Layers colored by the sun
Setting in the west
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Cats lay in the sun
Soaking up the light and warmth
But, Save room for me!!!!
Much love to all.
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I'm not going deaf!
Great to know I'm just good at
Ignoring people!!!!
lol that is a terrible Haiku! teehee
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I am so sorry
i am good at ignoring
but then i feel bad.
i come here and read-
to admire, laugh or worry
just to see your thoughts.
i might not write here
because i believe that mine
is waaay worse than Red's!
(at least SHE said, 'teehee!
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You both do quite well
Haiku is not for the wimps
But for crazy peeps!
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Good for Reds hearing
Ignoring people's ok
But only somtimes!
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Kathec, don't be shy
We need all the help we can
Feel free to share more!
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much love to all poets! And the rest of us to!!!!
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candy wrappers lay
Abandoned on the table
Bought way too many!
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The hat sings and dances. LOL
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Moon likes Halloween,
This is fairly obvious,
From costume and toys.
Monica, how would I make this one better? My intention is there, but it is to choppy and not fully explanatory. Can you rewrite it so that I can get an idea of how to phrase myself more succinctly?
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I think it's fine. But maybe I'd do this?
Moon likes Halloween
From the costumes and the toys
This is obvious!
The "joke" or " punchline" at the end seem to make the Haiku funny. And I love funny ones as you can tell. LOL
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On halloween
i was a ghost
no one saw me.
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but i ate some candy.
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Lump was just fluid,
Built up around my scarring.
Got my NED!!!!!!!
Yippee! Happy Dance.
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What a fun thread! Can I play too? Here is one I came up with on a day that I had a lot of time on my hands...
I'm the tiny bug
Inside the woodpecker's tree
Endless MRI
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Shutterbug, I started laughing as soon as I read that. My DH wanted to share so I read it to him. He didn't get it. I guess it loses something if you haven't had an MRI. LOL
Be gone aches and pains,
You don't count now, I got my
Coveted dx
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Red's jumping for joy
All of us are jumping too
Welcome NED!
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Red I'm so happy for you.
Finally, NED
But Wow! It took long enough!!!!
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You must be relieved
To hear the diagnosis
You really needed.
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Shutterbug, Hello!
Yes, please join us on this page
We can use talent!
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Never had the fun
Of MRI banging noise
Can't do MRI
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Big magnet in there
Would rip out my pacemaker
Not what they look for!
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Can you picture that?
The look on their faces, Hmmmm
Almost worth the mess........
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Kathec was not there
Wasn't there again today
Apologies, Shel!
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Ok that was lame
Shel Silver stein would hate me
Messing up his poem.......
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Welcome shutterbug! We have a lot of fun in here. But we also share worries to. Feel at home and we'll look forward to more of your poetry!
Red, it's so great to have good news. And when your DH has to have an MRI someday remind him about the bugs inside the trees..... LOL
Kathec if you weren't there who gave out the candy?
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Hello Red and Moon
Thank you for the warm welcome
Glad I found this thread
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haha moon! we live in a neighbor hood where no kids dare go. It's become quite the "hipster" neighborhood. All the kids are teens and into other stuff, like making bands, making art, stuff like that. And then now those hipsters are having babies! strollers and stuff everywhere! businesses give treats to kids. i just meant i didn't go any where or do anything! So no-one could tell if i was there!
Red, I am so happy to see your tagline change! did you get my pm, or did i write it then not send it? I am glad you are good!
welcome shutterbug, great mri haiku
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I have always loved that poem Moon, so i will recreate the first verse here...
Yesterday, upon the stair,
I met a man who wasn't there.
He wasn't there again today,
I wish, I wish he'd go away...Second verse is kind of creepy so we won't go there! Lol.
Thanks for all the good wishes everyone. I am so relieved and wanted to share it with you.
Kathec, yes you sent me a PM, but it is month end and I just don't computer during that time (except to share my good news with everyone) so I am afraid I didn't answer. But thanks so much for asking and being there to support me. (((hugs)))
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